I started making a new cartoon a few days ago which can be seen here in it's current incomplete state. I have come across various problems.
1 - I don't want to use dialogue because i feel it would spoil the atmosphere
2 - how do you tell a good story and make it funny, without dialogue?
3 - the car bit looks rubbish :3
so, if you can help with any of those problems, let me know, or if you just want to give some Constructive Criticism, let me know :D
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/210508 /32238_the_one_with_that_man_in_it.php
there's the link again, just incase ^^