Not bad
for a first "real" flash that was pretty good. I thought it was alright, it seemed very typical and nothing new, but hey, I started with stick fights and rock music and ended up with 2 daily firsts, so keep going! I like the title animation, I can see you put effort into it, just keep going, you'll be making top quality flashes in no time... well actually it took me 5 years, but y'know what i mean ;)